84K

Neither an easy or a cheerful read, Claire North's 84K is a dystopian thriller set in a near-future England which has surrendered itself entirely to the attractions of business. In a Faustian pact, the Government has handed over all its functions to The Company, and given it a free hand in how it carries those functions out. The Company collects taxes, and hands back to Government what it sees fit. Citizens are judged by how much they are fiscally worth and how much insurance they carry. Any crime can be bought off, if you have the money or the insurance cover. Victimhood is assessed on the victim's worth to society; so murder may attract an indemnity of hundreds of thousands of pounds - or a lesser sum, like the £84,000 of the title. show more If your cover is good enough, of course, you can meet that indemnity easily. But if you're poorer, then incurring an indemnity for some minor or petty infringement could break you. Imagine that you were suddenly landed with a bill for, say, £7,500 out of nowhere. People on moderate incomes might struggle to meet that; people with low or no income would find it beyond them, and so the alternative - indentured servitude, or 'the patty line' - is imposed.

By the time of this novel, the system is well entrenched, and opposition to it appears both pointless and ineffective. Our protagonist - let's call him "Theo Miller" - had humble origins but now works in the Criminal Audit Office, assessing the value of lives taken or indemnities due. But when a childhood friend is murdered, and her £84,000 indemnity is paid by a corporate assassin almost out of petty cash, Miller feels obliged for a number of reasons to follow up the case, even when his superiors disapprove.

The story is told in multiple timelines and in a stream of consciousness style which can be unsettling, as most of the characters don't have well-formed consciousnesses to begin with and never seem to be able to complete a train of thought. We are stuck with the awful reality of a (vey well-realised) society which allows the 1% all the luxuries they could want, at the expense of making the 99% live in a dystopia. "Theo Miller" moves uneasily through this world - he is a well-drawn but ineffective character - until about two-thirds of the way through when the tone of the novel changes abruptly and instead of moving amongst the 99%, we are dealing with the 1%. The non-linear narrative adds another dimension and keeps the reader alert as the pieces fall into place.

About half-way through this book, I considered what I had learned about the society we were being shown. The "patty line" - which started out preparing burgers for fast food, but has since expanded to cover any menial labour that supports the economy - provides the basis for all of society. Those on the patty line cannot get off, as they never earn enough to repay their indemnity. They can be bought and sold, so the indentured servitude is actually slavery. And slaves are dispensable - either thrown out when they become too expensive to employ, or discarded if they fall victim to one of the many failures of (non-existent) health and safety rules - because such things were dropped by The Company long ago as being uneconomic. Everybody knows that this is the case, but no-one takes any notice and conveniently brushes it under the carpet

So - a society whose economic activity is built on disposable slave labour, and whose citizens know but look the other way. The parallels to Nazi Germany are unmistakeable. Yet the ghastly corporatism was arrived at through high-placed individuals feathering their own nests at the expense of everyone else. 84K should be widely read, because there are those who would see it as a utopia rather than a dystopia, who would see in the attitudes of the 1% values that they would consider admirable. The rest of us should read this book, and take its lessons, especially as to the ease that the slippery slope can offer. The style of the novel may put some off - it is not straightforward - but the picture is too important to ignore. show less

Between Jarman’s visions of a post-Thatcherite UK and North’s vision of a post-Austerity UK, I’m not sure I can either tell the difference or see much that distinguishes them. That the Tories have been systematically robbing the UK since 1979 is historical fact. How genre writers have responded to that – at least, the few that actually bothered – is a different matter. UK sf writers of the 1970s built the government’s incompetence into their worlds; later sf writers had plainly drunk too much Tory Kool-Aid (bar a few notable exceptions). But that’s an argument for another time. 84K reads like a cross between 1984 refashioned for a twenty-first century audience and a 1970s consumerism-gone-made satire. Which, sadly, makes show more it feel like a book out of its time. It has a point to make, and it tells its story well, but it feels mostly like the target at which it’s aimed no longer exists. North is a writer to be treasured, and if not every book she produces hits its mark, she has the virtue of actually aiming at something. I thought The Sudden Appearance of Hope much the better book, for all that 84K ought to be the more relevant book and so more impactful. I will however read more books by North because she is clearly worth it. show less

84K was my second foray into the writing of Claire North, so I didn’t know exactly what to expect. The description intrigued me, though, so I decided to give it a go. And I was a little disappointed, all in all.
So here's how this novel works; human rights have been abolished, crime is punished by huge, itemized fines that are calculated by the Criminal Audit Office, and if the guilty party can't pay the fines, they are sent to the patty line. Though the “patties” do more than make burgers, now. They are pretty much becoming a slave for society. Even though the Government are still in power, it is really ‘the Company’ that run the show.
Also there was a country-wide privatization of all sorts of public services to an extreme, show more with government and this one, all-encompassing Company in bed together while they destroy the country. North's near-future England is finally so completely privatized that entering the Cotswolds requires the proper border permit. This is where the 1% live, of course.
The 1% are firmly in charge, and they keep the less privileged 99% in line with arbitrary nonstop draconian fines and lawsuits. And other darker means as well. Doctors, lawyers, teachers, police will work only for the rich and “properly insured”. Thirty-year-olds turn to crime and prostitution after layoffs routinely replace them with younger, cheaper workers. It’s a nightmare.
Most of us have by now experienced victim blaming and lesser rights for aliens because of the political rulers in charge today. But North takes it just a bit further, so that Thomas’s Criminal Auditing job, the epitome of dehumanising crime, is not such a far stretch.
We’re already seeing gated communities, relocation of the aesthetically distasteful poor, corporate sponsorship/ownership of sports teams and venues, privatised public services (police, hospitals, prisons) with the accompanying increase in prices and decrease in service. The world North presents is not so far from that. In fact, it rings so frighteningly true that we practically hear it breathing down our necks.

It's a interesting take on how this country can go to hell via rampant capitalism, and while it's well written, it's also not a bad story plotwise. The narrative style is quite exasperating I found. We jump from past to present, ricocheting between characters, and moving from an omniscient pov to in-head writing that did not work for me, at least not here. There's this also thing happening where she writes unfinished sentences, all over the place. I get that she has her own writing style but this was just irritating and confusing and just too quirky. Yes, if it's explained it can add to the story but this was just half sentences with no context or explanation. And the repetition was overly used to the point of annoyance.
The action moves between three different time periods randomly, sometimes for a chapter at a time but sometimes just for one paragraph. There is no punctuation in much of the speech which makes it difficult to read and is an odd creative decision. But like I said before, the most jarring thing of all, however, is the amount of unfinished sentences and pieces of dialogue. It makes the book difficult to read and to follow, and prevented me from being immersed in the action. An example of some dialogue, exactly as it is written in the book, with no punctuation, to demonstrate how hard it can be to follow:
“I need to get Lucy back I need to get her out there she needs to be
I can’t help you
She needs to be I can if I can get her out of there then
There’s nothing I can do
But you’re part of it you’re part of the system you work for
I can’t do
I NEED TO GET HER BACK I NEED TO
I’m going now
SHE’S THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS NOW SHE’S WHY I’M HERE SHE’S WHY I’M OUT WHY I’M CLEAN SHE’S”

So while it was a great premise, it was marred by style-over-substance execution, for me. The veering between time and characters also distracts from the main plot which is never ultimately solved. I love books with frank depictions of revolution but 84K never answers if it was worth it. I ended up reacting and caring far more about the side characters than I did for Theo or Neila. If you’re OK with a novel that focuses more on style, 84K is the grim but (supposedly) poetic dystopian novel for you.
Also Peter Kenny was the narrator of the audiobook. He was very good, but he had all those unfinished sentences and pieces of dialogue to deal with, so he did whatever he could with what he had, I’m guessing.

3 stars, and recommended to those who don’t mind the confusion, etc. show less

How much is a life worth? Theo Miller knows something about that. He works at the Criminal Audit Office assessing the cost of things like theft, arson, battery, murder. To assess the cost of a murder, for example, you have to see how much the life taken was worth, discounting for things like criminal history, prospects for future productiveness, drug habits, etc. Some lives just aren’t worth all that much. Not in Theo Miller’s society at least. Not since nearly all companies got subsumed by The Company and the government contracted out most of its responsibilities to The Company as well. It’s a nice tight fit — the government and The Company — and if it means a large amount of collateral wastage of human life, well, that show more doesn’t matter so much if those lives weren’t all that valuable to begin with, or more precisely, not that valuable once The Company got through with them. It’s a society begging to be blown up and, strangely, it looks like Theo Miller might just have to be the one to do it. Well, if he really were Theo Miller that is…

This slightly futuristic dystopian Britain is both frighteningly plausible and laughably implausible. The trouble is that it’s rather difficult to ascertain which is which. And it may be too much for the complex interweaving plot lines to accommodate. Because, very unusually for Claire North, this story takes an inordinate amount of time to get airborne. I would say nearly a hundred pages. Of course once it does find its wings, it soars. But there is a troubling weightiness to the pacing and a certain ponderousness to the characterization of this distasteful near-Britain. Rather than becoming a high-concept thriller, the novel is pulled down by belaboured comparison to a world which, frankly, might not be that much better. It’s as though the social message took precedence over the tightness of the story or the need to generate sympathy for some of the characters.

Despite reservations on this novel, I still find North’s writing electrifying. She can be so deft. So I’m still going to gently recommend it even though I wasn’t completely whelmed. It’s still worth it to be in Claire North’s company for a time. show less

I really had to debate between giving this a full five stars or the four, but ultimately it all boils down to whether or not the heavily ambitious tale was pulled off in spectacular flavor or whether it must remain a disquieting tale with an end that will either leave a bittersweet taste in your mouth or leave you anxious.

I personally think it'll be a bit of both.

I'm reminded of a bit of Les Miserables and a bit of Charles Dickens in this one, which is either odd or awesome when you consider that this is a high-concept SF dystopia where everything boils down to a price tag.

Lives, crimes... ANYTHING can be paid for. If you're unproductive, it's much easier just to liquidate the asset. Namely, you. Pay the blood price. And if you're rich show more enough, then anything can be had. It's the ultimate capitalist nightmare.

Fine. We've had stories like this before. Even recently. But here's where Claire North really shines. She never rests on any kind of concept. She dives deep, retaining a lyrical air with complex and satisfying novel structures that focus more on telling highly personal and emotional thematic threads for her characters. Linear storytelling is not a high priority.

And in that respect, she has a lot of giant storytellers' shoulders to stand on. She's carrying on a very creative and complex tradition and owning it for the SF community. For that, I must applaud. :)

For this tale, however, we go from apathy and invisibility to the realization that the MC has had it all wrong the entire time, that missed opportunities and reveals such as his high-school flame having his child and he never even knew... and especially in this world... would have truly nasty consequences. Especially when that old flame is murdered. She was worth only a measly 84k.

After that, it's a tale worthy of a mighty revenge couched in the simple statement that he will find his daughter.

Usher in some truly horrific worldbuilding, degradation, gruesome deaths, and revolution, all the while seeing how the other side lives... and dies... and we've got something quite epic. Without quite feeling epic.

The MC's quest is monomythical. Nothing else matters. The pendulum has swung.

The resolution is fascinating and complex and not easily digestible. Everyone seems to have a hard time living in this world. There are no easy fixes. This is not a place for heroes.

I would not expect any readers to come away feeling happy... but that's not the purpose of this tale. It's meant to make you think. And it does that in spades.

Not a traditional blockbuster, right? Right. And that may be its ultimate strength. show less

An excellent and rewarding read.
Claire North delivers a richly detailed dystopian near-future that is close enough to the mess that we find ourselves in to be extremely relatable.

The 'good guys' are on the whole very well drawn, although the 'bad guys' are a little two dimensional.

The real power of the story, for me, lies in the attitudes and responses of the 'ordinary' people. In places, it becomes an allegory of Nazism.

Perhaps harshly, the book loses out slightly because of the weaker set pieces in the denouement.

I will definitely continue to read her books.

https://fromtheheartofeurope.eu/84k-by-claire-north/

I’m a big fan of Claire North’s work anyway, but this is a bit different – a well-realised near-future dystopian England, where crime and social transgression have been transformed into accounting units (along with the privatisation of most public services) and the underclass is oppressed by cosy collusion between big business and government. Our protagonist, a minor cog in the bureaucracy of punitive taxation, is moved by a shadow from his own past to begin fighting back against the system. A couple of interlocking plot lines, so that you can look at the story from slightly different angles. Grim but convincing.