One Word Kill

by Mark Lawrence

Impossible Times (1)

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In January 1986, fifteen-year-old boy-genius Nick Hayes discovers he's dying. And it isn't even the strangest thing to happen to him that week. Nick and his Dungeons & Dragons-playing friends are used to living in their imaginations. But when a new girl, Mia, joins the group and reality becomes weirder than the fantasy world they visit in their weekly games, none of them are prepared for what comes next. A strange--yet curiously familiar--man is following Nick, with abilities that just show more shouldn't exist. And this man bears a cryptic message: Mia's in grave danger, though she doesn't know it yet. She needs Nick's help--now. He finds himself in a race against time to unravel an impossible mystery and save the girl. And all that stands in his way is a probably terminal disease, a knife-wielding maniac and the laws of physics. Challenge accepted. show less

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I had fun reading this book. I don't think I can get that across with plot summaries so I'm giving an overview and then sharing the notes I made as I went along.

I recommend the audiobook version of 'One Word Kill'. Click on the SoundCloud link below to hear a sample.


https://soundcloud.com/brilliance-audio/one-word-kill-by-mark-lawrence


Overview

Set in England in 1986 Mark Lawrence's new YA book, the start of a new series, tells the story of a D&D playing, teenage boy, dying of cancer, who gets the chance to save the first girl he's ever gotten to talk to like she's a real person.

It's not a cosy book - too much clear thinking and physical pain and too many encounters with nasty people for that - but it's a hopeful book, as long as you show more believe in the power of imagination and advanced mathematics.

The ending of the book seemed pretty final (in a quietly satisfying way) so I'm curious to see how Mark Lawrence will carry this forward into a series but, when he does, I'll be buying it.

12% Mark Lawrence Does It Again.

My first encounter with Mark Lawrence was with 'Red Sister' - the first book in a fantasy trilogy. In my review I said:

'Reading “Red Sister” was like watching a Tarantino movie, (not the ones with the clever scripts, more like “Dawn til Dusk”) only without the humour, You find yourself spellbound by the action and repulsed by the people.'


Mark Lawrence handles difficult topics (Child slavery in 'Red Sister' a teenager dying of cancer in 'One Word Kill') from a different angle than the ones I'm used to. He doesn't trivialise or sensationalise them. He looks at them afresh with a, 'So, this is happening - now what?' mindset that makes them fresh both in their pain and their hope.

Here's what the publisher's summary says about 'One Word Kill':

In January 1986, fifteen-year-old boy-genius Nick Hayes discovers he’s dying. And it isn’t even the strangest thing to happen to him that week.

Nick and his Dungeons & Dragons-playing friends are used to living in their imaginations. But when a new girl, Mia, joins the group and reality becomes weirder than the fantasy world they visit in their weekly games, none of them are prepared for what comes next. A strange—yet curiously familiar—man is following Nick, with abilities that just shouldn’t exist. And this man bears a cryptic message: Mia’s in grave danger, though she doesn’t know it yet. She needs Nick’s help—now.

He finds himself in a race against time to unravel an impossible mystery and save the girl. And all that stands in his way is a probably terminal disease, a knife-wielding maniac and the laws of physics.


This is about as accurate as a Tory spin doctor's summary of COVID-19 mortality rates.

It makes it sound like this is a Brit version of 'Ready Player One' - all cheery against-the-odds heroism and happy endings.

But it's written by Mark Lawrence, so I knew that couldn't be right.

Nick is fifteen, has been diagnosed with terminal cancer and is going through his first bout of Chemo-Therapy. There's nothing funny about it, especially when Mark Lawrence makes Nick into an extremely bright, self-aware fifteen-year-old with no illusions about what's going on.

I wouldn't normally let myself read a book where the main character has cancer. I've seen to many people die of it. Yet I'm reading this because I know Mark Lawrence won't just pour sorrow down my throat like a CIA waterboarder,- He'll play the same trick on me that real-life does. He'll add something to make me keep going. Something that feeds my curiosity even when I see no hope.

So, here I am, two chapters in, and he's made me laugh and cry; he's strung sentences together that make me go, 'I'd like to have written that' and he's got me wanting to know what happens next even though I'm watching a teenage boy die.

Here's some of the text that has me hooked:

Nick, in his hospital bed, getting Chemo:

"They had us arranged by length in treatment so the ward looked rather like an assembly line, taking in healthy children at one end and spitting out corpses at the other.'


And

'If crisp white linen and no-nonsense smiles could cure cancer nobody would ever die of it.'


Nick describing a frightened girl who can't stop talking and who has to stay on the ward after his temporary release:

'She kept talking as I followed Mother out, as if the conversation were a rope and if she only kept it unbroken I would be held by it, unable to leave.'


What does it say about me that I can feel my heart hurt as I read these words and yet still admire how perfectly they say what needs to be said?

Then there are Nicks descriptions of his D&D friends:

'John’s one annoying habit was that he spoke his laughs. He didn’t laugh like a normal person . . . he said ‘hah’. It made me less willing to trust him. Laughter should be unguarded even if nothing else is.'


And

'John and Simon went to the same school as me, Maylert, a private school nestled up against the banks of the Thames. You didn’t have to be rich to go there, just not poor... ...Simon's parents weren't rich, a teacher and a university lecturer, but they stumped up the fees so that Simon would get beaten less viciously and by a better class of bully. Simon has "victim" written all over him: overweight, obsessive, and blessed with a set of social graces that made me look suave.'


This shows me Nick has always seen things clearly and isn't just waking up because his blood is trying to kill him.

If this book stays like this, with Mark Lawrence wringing my emotions while dragging me along leashed by my curiosity and my attraction to his sharp-edged words, I'm going to be exhausted but happy by the time I finish it.

32% Teenage Nerd Heaven

Despite all the pain around the whole dying of cancer thing, I'm enjoying losing myself in this.

It's a Young Adult book that works just fine for adults and is pitched at the kind of young adult I used to be - the nerdy kind that liked the mind-bending bits of science, even if I didn't have the maths to understand them properly.



The book is set in 1986. when I was in my late twenties and all I knew about Richard Feynman was what he wrote in "Surely, You're Joking Mr Feynman!" which is a set of humorous anecdotes and a lot of that went over my head.

This wouldn't have been a problem for fifteen-year-old Nick, who is reading Feynman's 'Quantum Mechanics and Path Integrals' when Mia, a girl who has recently joined Nick's D&D group pops by unexpectedly for the first time, dressed in full goth regalia.

I loved that, after some initial awkwardness with Nick's rather surprised and not sure what to do next Mother (remember those days?) Mia asks Nick what he's reading and we get this exchange:

‘Quantum mechanics.’ I held up the book.
‘Cool.’ Mia sat on the bed. Closer than friends normally sit next to friends. She smelled of patchouli oil. I liked it. ‘What’s that about then?’ ‘Well . . . it’s about everything, really. It’s the most accurate and complete description of the universe we’ve ever had. It’s also completely bonkers.’ I hesitated. I was pretty sure this wasn’t what you were supposed to talk about when girls came to visit. ‘More bonkers than general relativity?’ Mia took the book from the death grip I had it in. ‘The twins paradox is hard to beat.’ With a sigh, I relaxed. She was one of us! The magical power of D&D to draw together people who knew things. Who cared about questions that didn’t seem to matter.


I also liked the way Nick gets the attention of a UCL Physics Professor - its nerd wish-fulfilment all the way:

Professor James had seemed rather surprised to see me at his door. He asked me if I were lost. I answered by asking him if he had considered the Ryberg Hypothesis in non-Euclidian manifolds above five dimensions, because it suddenly became provable, and that fact had powerful implications for high order knot theory. After that, he was all mine.


And then there are the jokes that only nerds make. When Nick arrives at the next D&D session, Mia greets him with:

‘Of all the worlds, in all the universes, he walks into mine.’ Mia wrapped the Casablanca quote around Everett’s many-world interpretation and gained yet another level in my esteem.


Yep, these are my people, or at least, I'd like them to be.

80% An interesting take on violence, especially in a YA book

I think this is more than a YA book. The ideas work well for readers of any age. This quote, about the impact of the broken violent ones among us, in this case, a guy called Rust, is a great example of that..

‘creatures like Ian Rust were like the cancer cells among the crush of blood cells in my veins. Rare, but requiring only one to begin to pollute everything around them. Because ugliness multiplies, and hurt spills over into hurt, and sometimes good things are just the fuel for evil’s fire.’
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A sci-fi coming of age tale featuring quantum physics, plenty of D&D and a likable group of friends out to save one of their own? That about sums up One Word Kill, the first in the Impossible Times trilogy by Mark Lawrence.

15-year-old Nick Hayes has been diagnosed with an aggressive form of leukemia. In between rounds of chemo, Nick meets with his friends to play D&D and forget about life for a while. When a strange man begins to stalk Nick and delivers a dire warnings about the the future, Nick and his friends discover that real life is crazier than they ever imagined.

This book was a lot of fun, has a lot of heart and I quickly found myself absorbed in Nick's story. Told entirely from Nick's point of view and set in 1980's featuring a show more group of kids as our heroes, I can see why the book is being compared to Stranger Things. Given my mother's recent health issues Nick's situation struck home hard and his friend's reactions made me a little teary-eyed. I loved the blend of the scifi elements and the ending was satisfying yet left me wanting more. I'm quite glad I don't have to wait long for the next book as the entire series is being published this year. show less
One Word Kill by Mark Lawrence. Review for Netgalley

A group of teen friends in 1986 united by their love of Dungeons & Dragons are pulled into a spiral of danger and adventure and growing pains. But in London, not Indiana. The comparisons to Stranger Things are inevitable, and perhaps even intentional, but although the heart of the story is often similar (misfit kids banding together to get through the pain of life, discover the joy of it, and also do crazy things together) it is altogether its own beast. It is, for one, a science fiction/time travel story, rather than a science fiction/cosmic horror story. Also, the adults are far less involved than in ST. But it still preserves that golden glow of love for a time, and an appreciation show more of the humanity of young people, that is the same.

The gentleness of this story, the warm heart it carries for its characters, is almost shocking coming from Lawrence's previous stories--Jorg Ancrath was many things, but sensitive to the joy and pain of simple life he was not. And yet the characters in One Word Kill most certainly are. They are kids, and they act like it, but they are also filled with love for one another that often defies words, but drives their actions.

Nick, our protagonist, and his friend Mia tricking the emotionally closed off Simon into learning to dance so he could go to a party; the friends banding together to protect each other against a homicidal bully without a second thought; the acceptance of each other's differences with natural grace. It's a story of love.

There is, of course, pain here as well. The children (and they are children) lose things that can never be regained, and it is handled well.

The writing is fluid and natural, as well. Lawrence has always been a strong writer of dialog, but I was actually surprised at how earnest and real these characters feel. So many voices in his previous works were trapped by sarcastic insincerity I had almost come to expect it from the author, but this book alone proves me wrong. It's a pleasant mistake to make.

One thing that perhaps I didn't like as much is the kind of universalizing of D&D as a magical gift to all weirdos and misfits of the 80s. As one of those weirdos, I have to say D&D never offered me anything like the emotional panacea that is implied here. I much preferred the stories in books to the ones that people tried to make me be part of. But that's a personal issue, and of course those who grew up with the monster manual in hand will likely feel differently.

But in summary, I enjoyed this book. I enjoyed watching the characters take their first fumbling steps out of childhood, I cringed at the pain they faced, and I am glad I got the chance to read Lawrence's latest work.

Thank you to the publisher and the author for giving me the chance to review One Word Kill!
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Hmmm, I'm going to keep this short, this has been recommended by many authors I love and is my first journey into Mark Lawrence's writing and maybe because it has been built up to me or because I expected something very different, I was left deflated.

The writing is very good, the characters are likeable and you want to get into their world, but the mixture of 1980s, D&D, Time Travel and Real Life problems just didn't work for me.

Mr Lawrence created London in the 1980s perfectly, it read like an 80s book, think Murphy's Mob, Sculley and Mooey style, how the D&D linked to the characters situation was intelligently done, but thrown in the leads personal problems and the introduction of a character straight out of a late night version of show more The Bill and it just a bit too confusing for me.

I can see why people loved it, but don't think I'm too worried about finishing the trilogy, I have Mr Lawrence's Red Sister to give a go anyway!
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I came to One Word Kill immediately after giving up on two different, terrible (self-pubbed) scifi titles, and I was beginning to question whether I even still like science fiction any more. But this story of friendship, time-travel, math, destiny, and D&D sessions pulled me right back.

Teenage Nick mostly wants to avoid bullies, play tabletop games with his friends, and maybe get a girlfriend, but he’s got to deal with an aggressive cancer and cryptic messages from his future self. Future!Nick, called Demos, needs Nick’s help on a dangerous, probably deadly mission, and also he needs Nick to hurry up and invent time travel so Demos can travel back in time and remind Nick to invent time travel. It’s a lovely big ball of show more wibbly-wobbly temporal paradox avoidance.

There’s a bit of retro media to establish the 1980s setting, without the intense hipster nostalgia of Ready Player One. I really enjoyed the friendships between the boys, especially awkward, focused Simon, and they way the others relate to him. The scenes of D&D felt very realistic and everyday, and made a nice counterpoint to the wild time travel adventures. (Their gamer group does suffer from the Smurfette problem, but at least Mia is developed and complex.)

Nick’s at a British boys’ school, so the normal school bullies are about 10 minutes away from going all Lord of the Flies on a typical Tuesday. Even so, there’s a distinction between the usual nerd-bothering bullies, and a psychopath who happens to attend their school, and happens to be connected with Demos’ mission.

I realized, as the A-plot wrapped up, leaving a dozen sub-plots unfinished (Math[s]! True love and destiny! Elton! Are there any other girls in England?), that this is part one of a trilogy, and am now anxiously awaiting Limited Wish to see what happens with Nick, time travel, and his friends.
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You guys: Read. This. Book.

A crew of friends that doesn’t feel troped out—you’ve got the smart goth girl Mia, the rich kid John, the computational genius Simon, the acrobatics extraordinaire Elton, and lastly, the wonderful protagonist Nick who has an affinity for quantum theory (and math in general)—just like his dad.

It’s 1986, and Nick—15—has been diagnosed with leukemia. He juggles the usual challenges that come with being a teenage boy: wanting to play D&D with the boys (this story is so much fun with how D&D is woven into it), keeping up with his studies, staying under mom’s radar, avoiding the interest of school bullies, navigating his first crush—and all of this while undergoing chemotherapy. You can imagine how show more its effects would make it harder for a boy to maintain confidence and a positive outlook on things.

Mark is so fantastic at writing characters who feel 100% real. Cancer aside, I feel like I knew these kids in my own adolescence. There’s a huge sense of nostalgia in this story that coils around you and pulls you in. At roughly 200 pages, he doesn’t waste a single word, and despite the brevity, each character felt fleshed out and fully realized. I very much enjoyed this group of friends and tagging along on their journey.

One of my favorite movies is Mr. Nobody; without giving too much away, if you tend to ponder life and existence like I do, I think you’ll really enjoy the story Mark has crafted here. I can’t wait to read the next book. And Mark’s writing... it’s as delicious and eloquent as always. Reading his work has become one of my favorite hobbies.

Here’s a snippet:

People look funny when you turn down the TV volume and they dance without music. When they talk without meaning it’s the same thing. If you ignore the words, there’s an honesty in the emotion that fleets across faces in conversation.
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The Fault in Our Stars meets D&D fandom meets TIME TRAVEL.

I don't know why I thought this was an example of LitRPG but it isn't. It just happens to have a group of friends playing D&D in the 80's with our protagonist going through his own kind of hell with Cancer.

There happens to be a real-world adventure, a bit of romance, and a psychopath, but let's not forget a few closed-time-like-loops, memory alterations, and the sweetness of kissing a girl. :)

So what about One Word Kill? The D&D scroll that ignores saving throws once and for all?

Ahhh, this is where the book gets really good. Not only do we have a few D&D in-the-know tropes working their way into theme and plot, but we've got a few great reversals that make this all kinds of show more awesome.

I love it. It's light, definitely YA, but it was also good in the way that really surprised me. In a deep way. Emotional. The time travel bit was not a gimmick. It worked very well. :)

No spoilers! Enjoy it for yourself! :)
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Canonical title
One Word Kill
People/Characters
Nicholas "Nick" Hayes; Simon Brett; John Featherstonhaugh; Elton Arnot; Mia; Ian Rust (show all 8); Demus; Eva
Important places
Richmond, London, England, UK
Dedication
To everyone I’ve ever played D&D with. May all your hits be critical.
First words
When Dr. Parsons finally ran out of alternatives and reached the word 'cancer', he moved past it so quickly I almost thought I'd imagined it.
Quotations
Know thyself. Philosophers have been urging us to do that since the ancient Greeks. I don’t think anyone really does, though.
They say it’s good to share, but in the end, whatever anyone says, we face the real shit alone. We die alone and on the way we shed our attachments.
I was for the first time, in a short and self-absorbed kind of life, starting to really see it for what it was. The beauty and the silliness, and how one piece fitted with the next, and how we all dance around each other in a... (show all) kind of terror, too petrified of stepping on each other’s toes to understand that we are at least for a brief time getting to dance and should be enjoying the hell out of it.
Truth may often be the first casualty of war, but dignity is definitely the first casualty of disease.
Last words
(Click to show. Warning: May contain spoilers.)*kiss the girl*

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813.6Literature & rhetoricAmerican literature in EnglishAmerican fiction in English2000-
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PS3612 .A9484 .O54Language and LiteratureAmerican literature
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