Kate Allenton
Author of Intuition
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Works by Kate Allenton
Mystic Luck: Five Witches Fighting Destiny — Contributor — 3 copies
Mystic Tides: Four Witches Out to Right the Past — Contributor — 3 copies
Killing Chaos 2 copies
Time Keepers 2 copies
Haunting Chaos 1 copy
Stolen Justice 1 copy
Sour Layer 1 copy
Hard to Hold 1 copy
Down and Dirty 1 copy
Finding Chaos 1 copy
Reclaiming Chaos 1 copy
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This one makes many of the mistakes I consider to be amateur mistakes.
For example, it tries a lot to craft deeply emotional scenes but it rarely actually builds up an emotional connection to most of the characters involved which frequently leads to scenes that come across as melodramatic and over the top.
The tragic thing is that some of the scenes that could have built emotional investment with these characters could have been part of the story but the book deliberately skipped over many of these opportunities via narration.
In regards to the shades of grey, the author couldn't help but make these more like shades of white with a tiny bit of grey sprinkled in. The book tries to portray white knight characters that almost couldn't be more morally uncompromisingly good as ambiguous and questionable which really threw me off.
And in the process, the book has no subtlety whatsoever. The author might as well write out what emotion she intends a scene to invoke, it's so obvious.
The book beats the reader over the head with things that need to be handled with much more subtlety.
This is also the case with moral conflicts. It's just so incredibly prescriptive and it feels judgmental even though this was clearly not the intention.
On top of it all, it very much seems like it will develop into a love triangle. I have a lot of problems with the love triangle trope but so far the book didn't get far enough into any of the relationships between them to reach this problematic territory, but even without the many other problems, seeing that this is just going to become some stupid romantic back and forth with the MC essentially being either an asshole or spineless and passive I have no interest at all in continuing with the story. I am not saying this because she currently is either of those things. But a love triangle by definition doesn't work without the center of the triangle being at least one of those two things and that is why I hate the trope. It compromises even otherwise really good characters by its very nature.
I want to be clear about one thing. Excluding the whole love triangle shenanigans, I would have liked this book a lot if the execution was stronger. The general trope mix and the intentions behind it are right down my alley.
But the actual book just didn't live up to its potential.… (more)