Breath
by Donna Jo Napoli
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Elaborates on the tale of "The Pied Piper," told from the point of view of a boy who is too ill to keep up when a piper spirits away the healthy children of a plague-ridden town after being cheated out of full payment for ridding Hameln of rats.Tags
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Something strange is happening to the people of Hameln and it's up to Salz to figure it out.
What a depressing book. If nothing else, it's a detailed description of how ergot poisoning moves through a medieval German village and how superstition and religion can get in the way of problem solving, especially if everyone's on an acid trip. However, it's as if the author got lost on the way to a more interesting story.
The cover flap implies that this is a retelling of the Pied Piper of Hamelin, and it is, but not in the way a reader would hope. It almost feels as if the author got lost in her research and decided to do a completely different book, but was under a contractual agreement to include the Piper. It would have been stronger show more without him.
Due to some graphic imagery, this book is unsuitable for anyone under 13 or 14. It is also written to a middle school level, so isn't quite right for grades 11-12. show less
What a depressing book. If nothing else, it's a detailed description of how ergot poisoning moves through a medieval German village and how superstition and religion can get in the way of problem solving, especially if everyone's on an acid trip. However, it's as if the author got lost on the way to a more interesting story.
The cover flap implies that this is a retelling of the Pied Piper of Hamelin, and it is, but not in the way a reader would hope. It almost feels as if the author got lost in her research and decided to do a completely different book, but was under a contractual agreement to include the Piper. It would have been stronger show more without him.
Due to some graphic imagery, this book is unsuitable for anyone under 13 or 14. It is also written to a middle school level, so isn't quite right for grades 11-12. show less
An adult in medieval Germany drank an estimated five liters of beer daily. This is just one of the facts Donna Jo Napoli uses in her retelling of the Pied Piper. Salz is a young man of twelve living with what Napoli reveals is cystic fibrosis in the postscript. Salz is a part of a papist coven, a group of people practicing Catholicism alongside the area's previous religious practices. While Salz struggles with this balance and with his health, a mysterious plague comes to Hamlen. Everyone assumes their infestation of rats is the cause, but Salz isn't so sure. Napoli has given us a thoughtful character in Salz, and his puzzlement about the cause of the plague adds mystery. As usual, Napoli does an excellent job with describing a show more historical period and making a tale realistically dark without overwhelming the reader. show less
I loved this book! I was really impressed by how much research the author must have done; she sprinkles in the most minute details of historical accuracy that it blew my mind - and I'm sort of a history buff. I also loved this story because it was the tale of the pied piper, which somehow I had never heard before. I love how she personalized the story and made it so real and vivid. I would recommend this book, for sure.
Set in late 13th Century, Breath is the story of Salz, a 12-year old boy who has a serious illness that makes it almost impossible to work on his family’s farm. The story unfolds like a mystery – the people and animals in the town of Hamelin are sick and dying; is it the moldy grain brought on from the torrential rains; is it the plague of rats infesting the town; or is it witchcraft? When Salz is the one person not affected by the strange disease, he is accused of witchcraft. To prove his worth, Salz brings a pied piper to Hamelin to rid it of rats. In retelling The Pied Piper of Hamelin, Napoli creates a powerfully dark and vivid tale, everything one would hope a Medieval German fairy tale would be.
Napoli include a notes section show more where she explains certain details of the story, such as the illness that afflicts Salz, what was making the town folks ill, and why it was Salz was not affected. show less
Napoli include a notes section show more where she explains certain details of the story, such as the illness that afflicts Salz, what was making the town folks ill, and why it was Salz was not affected. show less
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Donna Jo Napoli was born on February 28, 1948. She received a B.A. in mathematics, an M.A. in Italian literature, and a Ph.D. in general and romance linguistics from Harvard University. She has taught on the university level since 1970, is widely published in scholarly journals, and has received numerous grants and fellowships in the area of show more linguistics. In the area of linguistics, she has authored five books, co-authored six books, edited one book, and co-edited five books. She is also a published poet and co-editor of four volumes of poetry. Her first middle grade novel, Soccer Shock, was published in 1991. Her other novels include the Zel, Beast, The Wager, Lights on the Nile, Skin, Storm, Hidden, and Dark Shimmer. She is also the author of several picture books including Flamingo Dream, The Wishing Club: A Story About Fractions, Corkscrew Counts: A Story About Multiplication, The Crossing, A Single Pearl, and Hands and Hearts. She has received several awards including the New Jersey Reading Association's M. Jerry Weiss Book Award for The Prince of the Pond and the Golden Kite Award for Stones in Water. (Bowker Author Biography) show less
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- Original title
- Breath
- Original publication date
- 2003
- People/Characters
- Salz
- Important places
- Hamelin, Lower Saxony, Germany
- Dedication
- For Brenda Bowen, who helps me breathe
- First words
- The beat is steady, unlike my own breathing.
- Last words
- (Click to show. Warning: May contain spoilers.)I concentrate on breathing.
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- Fiction and Literature, Teen, Tween, Young Adult
- DDC/MDS
- 813.54 — Literature & rhetoric American literature in English American fiction in English 1900-1999 1945-1999
- LCC
- PZ7 .N15 .B — Language and Literature Fiction and juvenile belles lettres Fiction and juvenile belles lettres Juvenile belles lettres
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