Outcasts United: The Story of a Refugee Soccer Team That Changed a Town

The tricky thing about writing a bestseller (Rammer Jammer Yellow Hammer) is that readers expect the next book to be just as good. We don't want to be disappointed.

The new is good: Outcasts United is as just as good, in fact it is great. However, you really cannot compare the two, as they are such different stories. Rammer Jammer is a fun, happy book about the fans that tailgate to the Alabama Crimson Tide football games.

Outcasts United is an intricate weaving of stories about one dedicated coach Luma Mufleh, an American-educated Jordanian woman, and the boys on her soccer teams. The boys all live in apartments in Clarkston, Georgia - designated final destination for relocated families from war torn countries including Liberia, Sudan, show more Bosnia and Afghanistan and many more.

This book will stay with you long after you close the cover. The boys and the tragic histories behind their journey to Clarkston. The story of their coach and what drives her to care for these boys and their families. Finally, the town of Clarkston, and its puzzlement over the amazing population of cultures delivered within their borders.

St. John tells the story of each individual with clarity and without judgment. Individual thoughts on each spark within me. I want to know more, and feel the need to research each of the boy's countries, regions and conflicts. I want to know about the families, their stories - are they happy they are in America or are they merely resigned, depressed that America offers them dark apartments, hard jobs and little respect or help?

One of the mothers - Beatrice - goes from a long battle to escape her war torn country, after five years of attempts finally gets permission (and a loan) to relocate to America. She lands with an unimpressive thump in the dark, hot apartments in Clarkston, Georgia and goes to go to work cleaning 16 rooms a day at the elegant Ritz Carlton Atlanta. What thoughts must have flown through her head - such incredible extremes? While she works, Beatrice lives in fear that someone will take her two young boys, so she orders them not to leave the apartment. Her fear is real - not knowing if the children are safe, not able to look after them after protecting them for so many years.

The boys eventually do sneak out of the apartment, the story of what happens to their family, and the relationship they develop with Luma the coach is an important part of the book. There are many more stories, more lessons to learn.

A good writer takes you on an adventure, makes you want to race through the book. A great writer drives you to continue the story, find out more, take action, reach out, and become a better person. Any or all of these things. I expect this book will be picked up by schools, I also expect that this book will become a media darling because St. John has done his job well.

Because I had the Early Reviewers, copy there was no epilogue printed in the book. Here's what I learned:

The advance copy of Warren St. John's OUTCASTS UNITED did not come with the epilogue. This is because the publishers wanted to include the latest possible news about the team and the community in the book. As things in Clarkston were fast moving, the online version epilogue (which will of course be in the finished edition) gives the news as recently as a few weeks ago. Go to www. OutcastsUnitedEpilogue.com to see the epilogue. show less

I can't help but feel like a party pooper, writing a critical review of a "story of hope, conflict, and transformation on the playing fields of an American town," but write it I will. Outcasts United is the story of the troubled players on three youth soccer teams in Clarkston, Georgia--a smalltown Everywhere, USA...at least until its designation as a refugee resettlement center upsets the longstanding social order. In the refugees who must adapt to their new lives in America and the Clarkston residents who must adapt to their new lives alongside the refugees, St. John had all the makings of a compelling narrative.

And yet, reading Outcasts United is like getting a bag of potato chips when you were expecting a full meal. St. John may show more excel in his work as a reporter for the New York Times, but in his inability to develop any of the personalities or situations that populate the narrative beyond the length of a feature article, he lacks the chops necessary to write a book-length work. He excels at descriptive passages (to the point of repeating many of them three or four times), but after 200 pages readers have no more insight into the personalities of the African, Balkan, and Middle Eastern refugee children on the Outcast teams or their headstrong Jordanian coach than they did after the first fifty.

Other reviewers have pointed out the overwhelming presence of typos on just about every page of Outcasts, which can be forgiven in an ARC. But the problem goes deeper than that: St. John appears to write without paying much heed to the words he's setting to paper. For instance, an individual who failed to make the cut for the first- and second-ranked teams at his high school is inexplicably described as having a "promising career in soccer." Worse still, St. John's narrative is disappointingly superficial for a topic that offers so much room to explore issues of nationality, class, belonging, and culture. Take for instance the episode where Outcast coach Luma Mufleh is inexplicably pulled over and arrested while accompanying her team to an important match. The arresting officer won't explain why there's a warrant out for Mufleh: is it because her taillight is out? Or because her middle name is Hassan? St. John alludes to previous instances of police harassment of refugees as Mufleh is handcuffed in front of her players and carted off to jail.

And then the issue is dropped. Not only does St. John not see fit to ask her thoughts on the arrest, or those of her players, he doesn't even see fit to explain why she was arrested at all. This is not the only instance where St. John inexplicably declines to explore the deeper repercussions of the issues he himself raises, and it's deeply unsatisfying whenever it occurs. And ultimately, it's what keeps Outcasts from reaching its potential as a full course meal. show less

A very well written book examining the effects that thousands of refugees from many, many different countries made on a very small town in Georgia, while also showing how some of the boys were nurtured by a Jordanian woman with a passion for soccer. Warren St. John gives us a window into the lives of some of the boys, their coach, Luma, how the City Council and Mayor react to the presence of the refugees in their midst, and some of the work of the relief agencies. This book gave me a microcosm of Clarkston, GA, in much richer detail than the information I expected. Recommended.

Outcasts United, A Refuge Team, an American Town by Warren St. John (pp 300). This imminently readable book is about a Young Jordanian-American woman coach and members of several of her soccer teams comprised of recent immigrants, a polyglot of Iraqis, Burundians, Liberians, Bosnians, Somalis, Afghanis, and others. As newly relocated immigrants, these young kids were dealing with torn apart families, poverty, prejudice, assimilation, cultural differences, language barriers, and more challenges than most of us can even imagine. To a large extent the players and their families were not particularly welcome where they landed in American (outside Atlanta, though it could have been anywhere). However, they persevered, as did the town’s show more residents who begrudgingly and unevenly accepted them. The author did a good job of withholding judgement about the various supposed bad actors in the story, doing his best to explain different perspectives and reactions to uninvited change that tested the tolerance and understanding of many of the people in the community. Above all the story is inspiring, but it is also aggravating, frustrating, nauseating, and enervating, even across the chasm separating reality and the written word. The coach, Luma Mufleh, is an amazing woman who devoted her life to soccer and young people in desperate need of the sport, friendship, leadership, strict discipline, and structure she offered. Her efforts taxed her, her players, players’ families, the town as a whole, and many of the community’s members. Despite many successes by a variety of measures, there is no wonderful, fulfilling ending. Rather the struggle continues, and this tale underscores the need for all of us to do the extremely hard work of building our own communities, including all residents and constituencies. show less

Wow! This was an amazing book. St. John followed a season with the Fugees soccer teams in Clarkston, Georgia. What makes the Fugees teams different from the usual kid soccer teams elsewhere in suburban Atlanta and around the country is that all the kids on the teams are refugees from war torn nations around the world who have been relocated to southern Clarkston. St. John focuses not only on the kids, roughly middle school aged, but on their families, histories, their unique coach, and on the rapidly changing face of the town of Clarkston. He weaves all of this together seamlessly, presenting a compelling story of the difficulties the refugees present to a town mired in its sleepy past, the escape that a seriously underfunded and show more ignored soccer program can offer to children who have seen and survived the worst that fellow human beings have to offer, and how the two things can come together: in conflict or in harmony. The personal histories here are completely horrific and engrossing. Coach Luma is inspiring. And the road blocks thrown up by the town for no good reason are infuriating. But St. John doesn't present shy away from the troubles that have visited the town with the huge influx of refugees. And he doesn't portray Mufleh, the female Jordanian coach volunteering her time, as without flaws. He tries to be fairly balanced, detailing ways in which the town has adapted and grown and made the advent of so many international peoples a positive one even as he highlights short-sightedness on the part of others in town. A definite challenge, one that was well done and kept me reading long past when the light should have been turned off, I would recommend this to anyone interested in narrative non-fiction. show less

…"Give me your tired, your poor,
Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.
Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me,
I lift my lamp beside the golden door!"
(from "The New Colosus" by Emma Lazarus, written in 1883; engraved on a bronze plaque and mounted inside the Statue of Liberty, 1903.)

Outcasts United: A Refugee Team, an American Town, is the compelling story of a diverse hodge-podge of some of the world's most "tired, poor, tempest-tost" youngsters ever to start new lives in the United States. Relocated from their violence-ruined homelands to a small, quiet suburb of Atlanta, the self-named "Fugees" find unexpected succor in the discipline and dedication of soccer training and show more competition.

Before reading it, I was a little afraid that Outcasts United would be another namby-pamby story of misfits who find society's recognition and peers' appreciation by their performance as a sports team, a là Disney. I am so glad to be wrong!

Author Warren St. John weaves the complicated stories of the refugees, their families, their phenomenal coach, and the town of Clarkston, Georgia into a compelling and thought-provoking narrative. Skillfully backtracking from present day problems of adaptation and assimilation, we are given the harrowing personal stories of the team members and their families.

Almost every boy is a survivor of tribal warfare or outright genocide. Their stories are similar to the horrifying accounts in Daoud Hari's The Translator: A Tribesman's Memoir of Darfur and Alphonsion Deng's They Poured Fire on Us from the Sky: The True Story of Three Lost Boys from Sudan and Dave Eggers's What is the What. In Outcasts, the author's journalistic style assembles some very powerful synopses of modern African history and current events. For me, this was one of the most useful and informative parts of the book.

There would have been no Fugees team, and likely no organized soccer at all for the refugees, were it not for the trajectory that brought their incredible coach from Jordan, via Smith College—a woman of Muslim heritage and western education who was determined to create an independent life. Her personal story could be a book in itself. Her dedication and tough love approach to coaching, her perseverance and hard work, her intelligence and humanity, show us that real heroism is made more of hard work than anything else.

Recommended heartily to all readers, but especially to educators and community leaders. show less

My library director asked me to read this book so I could potentially discuss it's eligibility for a Community Reads book.

I went in skeptical. I like very specific kinds of nonfiction, and I didn't think this was any kind of what I liked. I dragged my feet on reading it too (I checked it out over a month ago, had to renew it).

I shouldn't have worried. A narrative that focuses on a highly independent woman from Jordan who saw a community need and fed it slowly, building up her reputation and building that of her teams.

She saw kids who needed to do something to keep them safe (not just from the world, but from themselves: as is repeatedly mentioned, refugees often suffer from PTSD or other emotional fallout from simply having to leave show more their home and come to a new place, where they don't always speak the language fluently at first, among other things.). She saw, also, kids who liked to play soccer, but had no formal training. She saw kids who needed a small, manageable habit, that needed friends desperately, who needed leadership, who needed something to do while parents were out working at ungodly hours to keep their kids eating and in a home.

This woman went from one team of varying ages to three in the space of a couple years, and managed to see one of them almost to a regional WIN against teams that had been playing together for about a decade.

This was a vastly satisfying book and I highly recommend it. show less