The Dream of Perpetual Motion
by Dexter Palmer 
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Imprisoned for life aboard a zeppelin that floats high above a fantastic metropolis, the greeting-card writer Harold Winslow pens his memoirs. His only companions are the disembodied voice of Miranda Taligent, the only woman he has ever loved, and the cryogenically frozen body of her father Prospero, the genius and industrial magnate who drove her insane.Tags
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sturlington The Dream of Perpetual Motion is a steampunk retelling of The Tempest
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First off, I should say that I feel like I would’ve gotten more out of this book if I could remember more about The Tempest than the names of the characters. But the last time I read that play was at least twenty years ago and I have only the vaguest memory of how the whole thing went down. A quick look at Wikipedia has reminded me of the basic plot, which does illuminate my reading of The Dream of Perpetual Motion somewhat, but probably doesn’t get down to the heart of things.
Fortunately, it doesn’t really matter if all those references fly over my head. The story in this stands strong, even if you’ve never heard of the work it plays off of.
The cover is quick to tell me this this book is “steampunk”, a term I am very much show more tired of hearing since it seems that anything with a machine in it qualifies these days. But there are some actual steampunk-y bits to this story of greeting-card writer Harold Winslow: the tin men invented by Prospero Taligent (which Wikipedia [yes, I spend too much time reading Wikipedia] tells me was the name of an operating system back in the days when Mac computers were still Apples, a portmanteau of “talent” and “intelligent”, and I am wondering now if that was deliberate because if it was, it adds a whole new layer of interesting things to think about); the zeppelin on which Harold is doomed to live out the rest of his days flying high above the city with only the disembodied voice of Prospero’s adopted daughter Miranda to keep him company; the mechanical playroom enjoyed by Miranda and Harold as children, which is reset every night to be some other fantastic, hyperreal location.
Harold is invited to Miranda’s tenth birthday party, her first, and it seems only, party and her first contact with other children her age. Prospero keeps her locked in the obsidian tower that dominates the city of Xeroxville, but grows concerned that the lack of contact with children her own age is in fact hindering her development, hence the birthday party. A hundred boys and girls are flown to the tower, clutched bruisingly tight to the chests of terrifying mechanical angels and demons. Once there, Prospero promises each of them their heart’s desire. Which, through a rather circuitous route, is how Harold ends up on the zeppelin with Miranda twenty years later.
Palmer is a graceful storyteller, moving fluidly between Harold’s telling of his past as a ten-year-old boy, then a twenty-year-old man and finally, a thirty-year-old man, and his present aboard the zeppelin, with some lovely details popping up along the way. My favourite is the meeting of Harold and his sister, Astrid, in a bar in Picturetown, a place where the residents have decided not to speak, and instead carry on passionate conversations on index cards. Palmer manages to direct the reader’s attention to the right character, the right place at the right time, but nothing feels forced. The story unravels smoothly, without hitches, and even the occasionally stilted speaking style seems perfectly at home in this book, only feeling stilted when you lift your head and wonder if you would actually say something like that.
And the man has a sense of humour! There are some wry little turns of phrase here and there, but the moment I actually laughed out loud is when Harold’s sister, Astrid, is introducing some people to Harold at an opening for a show of her paintings:
“And this,” Astrid says, gesturing at a wiry gentleman wearing eyeglasses and a houndstooth suit in need of pressing, standing a little distance away from the rest of the group, looking slightly uncomfortable, “is Dexter Palmer, and he’s a—what?”
“I,” says Dexter Palmer. “Um.”
Endearing! And he also touches on some things that I have spent the last many years thinking about, such as the perception you have of yourself and the perception other people have and what the intersection of these two is. (Yes, I do need to just go play outside more.) The idea that the people you interact with carry around an image of you in their heads, and they tweak this every time they see you to constantly approximate a you in their heads. And naturally, the longer you know someone, the closer this approximation gets to the approximation you yourself have in your own head. It’s thing I think about and I’m always glad to see it pop up in someone else’s words, a new perspective on an old idea.
As if he didn’t already have me hooked, he throws in a little math to sweeten the deal:
I just want a sculpture that—” (he sighs forcefully and places the palm of his hand to his head) “—that means change. Pretend she’s a function and take the integral. That’s what I want.”
That is what we all want. show less
Fortunately, it doesn’t really matter if all those references fly over my head. The story in this stands strong, even if you’ve never heard of the work it plays off of.
The cover is quick to tell me this this book is “steampunk”, a term I am very much show more tired of hearing since it seems that anything with a machine in it qualifies these days. But there are some actual steampunk-y bits to this story of greeting-card writer Harold Winslow: the tin men invented by Prospero Taligent (which Wikipedia [yes, I spend too much time reading Wikipedia] tells me was the name of an operating system back in the days when Mac computers were still Apples, a portmanteau of “talent” and “intelligent”, and I am wondering now if that was deliberate because if it was, it adds a whole new layer of interesting things to think about); the zeppelin on which Harold is doomed to live out the rest of his days flying high above the city with only the disembodied voice of Prospero’s adopted daughter Miranda to keep him company; the mechanical playroom enjoyed by Miranda and Harold as children, which is reset every night to be some other fantastic, hyperreal location.
Harold is invited to Miranda’s tenth birthday party, her first, and it seems only, party and her first contact with other children her age. Prospero keeps her locked in the obsidian tower that dominates the city of Xeroxville, but grows concerned that the lack of contact with children her own age is in fact hindering her development, hence the birthday party. A hundred boys and girls are flown to the tower, clutched bruisingly tight to the chests of terrifying mechanical angels and demons. Once there, Prospero promises each of them their heart’s desire. Which, through a rather circuitous route, is how Harold ends up on the zeppelin with Miranda twenty years later.
Palmer is a graceful storyteller, moving fluidly between Harold’s telling of his past as a ten-year-old boy, then a twenty-year-old man and finally, a thirty-year-old man, and his present aboard the zeppelin, with some lovely details popping up along the way. My favourite is the meeting of Harold and his sister, Astrid, in a bar in Picturetown, a place where the residents have decided not to speak, and instead carry on passionate conversations on index cards. Palmer manages to direct the reader’s attention to the right character, the right place at the right time, but nothing feels forced. The story unravels smoothly, without hitches, and even the occasionally stilted speaking style seems perfectly at home in this book, only feeling stilted when you lift your head and wonder if you would actually say something like that.
And the man has a sense of humour! There are some wry little turns of phrase here and there, but the moment I actually laughed out loud is when Harold’s sister, Astrid, is introducing some people to Harold at an opening for a show of her paintings:
“And this,” Astrid says, gesturing at a wiry gentleman wearing eyeglasses and a houndstooth suit in need of pressing, standing a little distance away from the rest of the group, looking slightly uncomfortable, “is Dexter Palmer, and he’s a—what?”
“I,” says Dexter Palmer. “Um.”
Endearing! And he also touches on some things that I have spent the last many years thinking about, such as the perception you have of yourself and the perception other people have and what the intersection of these two is. (Yes, I do need to just go play outside more.) The idea that the people you interact with carry around an image of you in their heads, and they tweak this every time they see you to constantly approximate a you in their heads. And naturally, the longer you know someone, the closer this approximation gets to the approximation you yourself have in your own head. It’s thing I think about and I’m always glad to see it pop up in someone else’s words, a new perspective on an old idea.
As if he didn’t already have me hooked, he throws in a little math to sweeten the deal:
I just want a sculpture that—” (he sighs forcefully and places the palm of his hand to his head) “—that means change. Pretend she’s a function and take the integral. That’s what I want.”
That is what we all want. show less
Locked in an airship slowly descending to Earth, our narrator Harold Winslow tells us a story - his first despite years of writing verse for the "sentiment development division of the Xeroville Greeting-card Works". And quite a tale it is, an explanation of why his lifelong love Miranda is also aboard , never to be seen or touched by him, and why her adopted father, the mad genius Prospero Taligent, builder of the airship, is also aboard in suspended animation. It seems the dream of perpetual motion in the sky, tended by mechanical men, is not to be.
It's a story full of literary concerns with language and sounds and storytelling. Several characters quite deliberately set out to shape the narratives of their lives and others. And, of show more course, there are the frequent allusions to Shakespeare's Tempest. The plotting is definitely along the literary genre lines. In the crucial finale of the novel, we have to stop to hear not one but four characters' stories.
Science fiction and steampunk fans should not expect something truly novel. Genre images and icons are appropriated, but there is not a great deal of speculative rigor here, the working out of an idea's implications no matter how inherently absurd that idea is. We have a dash of cyberpunk in a world run by corporations and with no nation states though we never go beyond the confines of Xeroville or hear of any other cities. This is an alternate history of the vaguest sort. We only know this world diverged from our timeline sometime after Shakespeare. It is only in the last two parts of the novel that we are introduced to anything approaching an inherently interesting speculation and that involves the nature of Prospero's imprisoned son Caliban. There are mechanical men and steampowered "demons" and other interesting machines, but they are mostly there for drama and color and not deeply pondered as technology. Despite Prospero's aestheticism, we don't revel in their beauty with long descriptions.
And yet it works. I'm not a fan of the modern literary novel, but I liked this amalgam. Palmer welds the literary clockwork assembly to the chassis of steampunk and retro science fiction imagery. The solder he uses is interesting dialogue and humor. I think I detected Philip K. Dick's influence on some of Prospero's wackier machines - particularly the shrinkcab. Prospero's frequently appearing henchmen Gideon and Martin are funny and sinister. There is a literal wielder of acid. And the section involving Harold's suicidally creative sister Astrid and the spouting of a great deal of litcrit jargon was funny and seemed to be Palmer's poke at a modern aesthetic that values discomfort over beauty. show less
It's a story full of literary concerns with language and sounds and storytelling. Several characters quite deliberately set out to shape the narratives of their lives and others. And, of show more course, there are the frequent allusions to Shakespeare's Tempest. The plotting is definitely along the literary genre lines. In the crucial finale of the novel, we have to stop to hear not one but four characters' stories.
Science fiction and steampunk fans should not expect something truly novel. Genre images and icons are appropriated, but there is not a great deal of speculative rigor here, the working out of an idea's implications no matter how inherently absurd that idea is. We have a dash of cyberpunk in a world run by corporations and with no nation states though we never go beyond the confines of Xeroville or hear of any other cities. This is an alternate history of the vaguest sort. We only know this world diverged from our timeline sometime after Shakespeare. It is only in the last two parts of the novel that we are introduced to anything approaching an inherently interesting speculation and that involves the nature of Prospero's imprisoned son Caliban. There are mechanical men and steampowered "demons" and other interesting machines, but they are mostly there for drama and color and not deeply pondered as technology. Despite Prospero's aestheticism, we don't revel in their beauty with long descriptions.
And yet it works. I'm not a fan of the modern literary novel, but I liked this amalgam. Palmer welds the literary clockwork assembly to the chassis of steampunk and retro science fiction imagery. The solder he uses is interesting dialogue and humor. I think I detected Philip K. Dick's influence on some of Prospero's wackier machines - particularly the shrinkcab. Prospero's frequently appearing henchmen Gideon and Martin are funny and sinister. There is a literal wielder of acid. And the section involving Harold's suicidally creative sister Astrid and the spouting of a great deal of litcrit jargon was funny and seemed to be Palmer's poke at a modern aesthetic that values discomfort over beauty. show less
For fans of the literary fantastic, I can't recommend this book highly enough. Just beware: it is both VERY literary and VERY fantastical. By that, I mean the writing and structure of the story is subtle and complex, sometimes with a dreamy feeling and bits that the reader has to think about to fully figure out. And the story is a full-on explosion of strange landscapes, odd technologies and futuristic social customs that fully immerse the reader in a world that is most definitely not our own. Palmer uses Shakespeare's Tempest as the jumping off point and backbone for the characters and structure, but spins this inspiration off into something wholly original. The last book I found so unique, strange & thrilling was China Mieville's The show more City And The City. Fans of Mieville or Margaret Atwood's Scifi stuff should dig on this. show less
For fans of the literary fantastic, I can't recommend this book highly enough. Just beware: it is both VERY literary and VERY fantastical. By that, I mean the writing and structure of the story is subtle and complex, sometimes with a dreamy feeling and bits that the reader has to think about to fully figure out. And the story is a full-on explosion of strange landscapes, odd technologies and futuristic social customs that fully immerse the reader in a world that is most definitely not our own. Palmer uses Shakespeare's Tempest as the jumping off point and backbone for the characters and structure, but spins this inspiration off into something wholly original. The last book I found so unique, strange & thrilling was China Mieville's The show more City And The City. Fans of Mieville or Margaret Atwood's Scifi stuff should dig on this. show less
It's hard to label Dexter Palmer's debut novel The Dream of Perpetual Motion. There are definitely elements of steampunk, but, at the same time, it's not exactly what I think of when I hear the word steampunk. You could just group it in the sci-fi genre--it's an alternative history where robots essentially infest the earth--but that doesn't seem the right place for it either. Inspired by The Tempest, this novel is equally Willy Wonka as it is Shakespeare. Classifying it is hard to do, which leaves the doors of criticism and interpretation wide open.
Fans of quality literature should not be scared however. Yes, there's a little steampunk and a lot of sci-fi. But there also is a wide spread of wonderful writing--vibrant language both show more formal and witty, moving scenes filled with a poeticism missing in too much literature. The Dream of Perpetual Motion is a thoughtful and gripping work.
My greatest critique of the book is that it loses it's magic half way through. Now, this is fitting given the subject--a world where everything magical has been explained away and duplicated with technology. The world where we first meet our hero, Harold Winslow, is seen through the eyes of a child. And it is a gorgeous, fascinating landscape. It is easy to become swept up in little Harold's dreams and fantasies. It's fun and it's terrifying, but mostly, it's magical.
As Harold grows, however, he begins to see how little magic there really is in the world. So it's only appropriate that the text reflect his. And Palmer does a magnificent job presenting this transition seamlessly. Whatever tiny elements of magic still exists at the end of the novel are explained away by the most tedious monologues. It's appropriate, but that doesn't mean it is as fun. Without the magic, the story begins to move with the mechanical motion of its army of robots. show less
Fans of quality literature should not be scared however. Yes, there's a little steampunk and a lot of sci-fi. But there also is a wide spread of wonderful writing--vibrant language both show more formal and witty, moving scenes filled with a poeticism missing in too much literature. The Dream of Perpetual Motion is a thoughtful and gripping work.
My greatest critique of the book is that it loses it's magic half way through. Now, this is fitting given the subject--a world where everything magical has been explained away and duplicated with technology. The world where we first meet our hero, Harold Winslow, is seen through the eyes of a child. And it is a gorgeous, fascinating landscape. It is easy to become swept up in little Harold's dreams and fantasies. It's fun and it's terrifying, but mostly, it's magical.
As Harold grows, however, he begins to see how little magic there really is in the world. So it's only appropriate that the text reflect his. And Palmer does a magnificent job presenting this transition seamlessly. Whatever tiny elements of magic still exists at the end of the novel are explained away by the most tedious monologues. It's appropriate, but that doesn't mean it is as fun. Without the magic, the story begins to move with the mechanical motion of its army of robots. show less
In which greeting-card poet Harry is imprisoned in a perpetually airborne zeppelin by mad scientist-cum-magician Prospero and his children Miranda and Caliban--and if that's not enough Shakespearean namechecks for you, yes, there are plenty of Ferdinands and Ophelias in the supporting cast as well. This is an imaginative book by a talented author who has the gift of telling you fascinating insights about yourself and the way you view the world in phrases far more creative than you could think up yourself. He makes clear that the magical world he builds is set in the twentieth-century, but it's a different twentieth-century, one in which Flash Gordon-era technology took off and created a world run by mechanical men (never "robots") with show more funnel-shaped heads and steam coming out their ears who operate from their helicopters, zeppelins, and flying cars. It's a world redolent of that masterful novelist Steven Millhauser, a world of involuted, layered reality.
Now the bad news: the book is too long by half, and although I appreciated it throughout, I didn't always enjoy the ride and it eventually became a joyless slog. There are plenty of episodes devoted entirely to ego trips such as ridiculing litcrit jargon, and pointless post-modernist exercises such as the author introducing himself as a character. A background annoyance is the publisher's relentless insistence in promoting this as 'steampunk', a word which has attained escape velocity into total meaninglessness. show less
Now the bad news: the book is too long by half, and although I appreciated it throughout, I didn't always enjoy the ride and it eventually became a joyless slog. There are plenty of episodes devoted entirely to ego trips such as ridiculing litcrit jargon, and pointless post-modernist exercises such as the author introducing himself as a character. A background annoyance is the publisher's relentless insistence in promoting this as 'steampunk', a word which has attained escape velocity into total meaninglessness. show less
A steam-punk Tempest, a meditation on technology and love and the power of words, with a grand dollop of metaphysics thrown in. This is a unique book from a writer of enormous imagination and wit. At times I laughed out loud -- the Critic-o-matic, for example -- at others the prose just took my breath away. The riff on sounds contained within a particularly lethal symphony is worth the price of the book. So original! What a mind, what a mind, what a mind!!
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- Harold Winslow; Miranda Taligent; Prospero Taligent; Ophelia Flavin; Marlon Giddings; Allan Winslow (show all 15); Astrid Winslow; Caliban Taligent; Charmaine Saint Claire; Dexter Palmer; Talus; Artegall; Jason Fenman; Martin; Gideon
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- Prospero. -- Dost thou hear?
Miranda. Your tale, sir, would cure deafness.
-- William Shakespeare, The Tempest
Here opened another totally new education, which promised by far to be the most hazardous of all. The knife edge along which he must crawl, like Sir Lancelot in the twelfth century, divided two kingdoms of force which had not... (show all)hing in common but attraction. They were as different as a magnet is from gravitation, supposing one knew what a magnet was, or gravitation, or love. -- Henry Adams, The Education of Henry Adams - First words
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spiraling slowly down and crashing in to the open sea? - Quotations
- I’m going to try to tell a story now, and though I’ve made a life out of writing words, this is the first time I have told a story. There are no new stories in the world anymore, and no more storytellers.
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