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A Warrior’s Quest is the second book in Margaret Moore’s Warrior series. This one is about Urien who was a mercenary working for the villain in the previous book, A Warrior’s Heart, but before the end of the book, he turned over a new leaf and went straight. He now finds himself in the village of Bridgeford Wells where he’s heard a wealthy lord in need of soldiers lives. As it turns out, Lord Gervais remembers him from a tournament they both attended and was impressed with Urien’s show more skill, so he hires him to train his squires for an upcoming tournament he’s hosting. Urien has one month to whip the boys into shape and if he’s successful, he’ll have a permanent place among Lord Gervais’ soldiers. Upon arriving in town, Urien also meets Lord Gervais’ lovely foster daughter, Fritha, but because she dresses plainly and mingles among the townsfolk like she’s one of them, Urien doesn’t initially realize who she is. They don’t get off on the right foot, but as they get to know each other better, their friendly banter begins to turn into something deeper. However, Urien is just a nobody, a bastard who hasn’t even earned a knighthood and doesn’t expect to, while she’s a lady. Then there’s also Lord Gervais’ young wife who is jealous of Fritha and the devotion she seems to inspire among the people. She, along with a few of her cronies, stir up trouble for our lovebirds that could not only tear them apart, but also endanger Fritha’s life.

Urien is a bastard who never knew his father, and after his mother died when he was small, he went to live with a local farmer. The man never treated him well, so when he was old enough to fend for himself, he ran away with dreams of becoming a soldier. He eventually took up with a band of mercenaries and has lived that life ever since, which is how he came to be in the employ of the villain in the previous book. However, he ultimately turned on his employer and helped the hero of that story. So now he finds himself in need of new employment, which is how he comes into Lord Gervais’ service and meets Fritha. Although he knows he isn’t good enough for her, he can’t seem to resist her until he finds himself falling in love with her. At first things are going well and he’s making plans to ask for her hand, but when trouble finds them in the form of Lady Gervais, it may mean the end of their romance.

I really struggled to like Urien. I truly wanted to, and once he knows who Fritha is, he treats her pretty well, but there are several things he does that tarnished his heroic veneer for me. When he first meets Fritha, he propositions her, and during a later encounter comes on strong enough that she felt the need to knee him in the groin. Admittedly he didn’t know who she was yet, but for him to treat any woman that way didn’t endear me to him right out of the gate. Later on, within days of leaving Fritha, he jumps into bed with a prostitute, thinking she’ll help him forget Fritha. In the end, not much happened between them, because he finally got a clue, but for him to even think that in the first place, kind of sullied what he’d supposedly had with Fritha. I also don’t think his backstory was brought out into stark enough relief for me to fully understand how he felt either, and as a result, some of his actions seemed selfish and overblown. I understood that he had a rough childhood and had never known the love of family, but rather than trying to understand Fritha’s love for, not only her foster father, but also the townspeople she considers her family, and perhaps embracing them as his own as well, he abandons her, even when he knows she’s in danger, which was not a heroic action. Of course, he returns just in the nick of time, but by then I’d lost some respect for him. However, the most troublesome thing to me was his deep, dark secret, which wasn’t all that sympathetic to me. Granted, as an untrained lad, there was probably not much he could have done against several, large, full-grown mercenaries, but for him to just stand by and do nothing at all, not even verbally protest, even if it had cost him his life, again wasn’t heroic at all.

Fritha’s mother died when she was young and her father sent her to foster with Lord and Lady Gervais, then basically forgot about her. For all intents and purposes, Lord and Lady Gervais became her parents and she loved them dearly. But Lady Gervais also passed on, and later Lord Gervais remarried to a woman who is outwardly sweet and demure but inwardly is a shrew. She treats Fritha like nothing but a servant, and jealous of her connection with seemingly everyone she meets, the young Lady Gervais sets about trying to make Fritha’s life as difficult as possible. While most young women her age would probably have already been married off, Fritha is particular about wanting a man she can love and trust, and Lord Gervais cares for her enough to not pressure her. However, Lady Gervais is eager to get rid of her as soon as possible. Then Fritha meets Urien and soon falls in love with him. Although it seems that his background would make it impossible for them to marry, she’s adamant that she doesn’t care about his past and believes that Lord Gervais respects her and likes Urien enough to allow the match. But Lady Gervais is determined to not allow Fritha any happiness, and when the couple decide to keep their romance a secret until after the tournament is over, it allows Lady Gervais enough time to formulate a plan to get back at them. When Lady Gervais makes her machinations known, Urien wants Fritha to run away with him, but in spite of her life being in danger, she stands her ground, knowing that the lives of other people she loves could be at stake as well. Overall, I liked and admired Fritha. She’s loved by all the people, both in the castle and the village. She’s kind and caring, always interested in helping them with their problems and she’s incredibly efficient and energetic in managing the household. She’s very forgiving toward Urien, not caring at all about his background or the things he’s done in the past, but loving him for who he is now. She’s also very selfless in her dealings with everyone, willing to forfeit her own life to keep others safe.

I went into reading A Warrior’s Quest with high hopes that it would be a book I’d enjoy. It’s the highest rated book of the series on GoodReads. I’d also previously read and enjoyed three other books by Margaret Moore, including the first in the Warrior series, to which I gave keeper status. I had a few uncertainties regarding Urien being a partially villainous character in the previous book, but when he chose not to do his employer’s bidding in the end, I was willing to give him a second chance. But because of my aforementioned issues with his character, I didn’t end up falling for him in the way I wanted to or feel like he redeemed himself very well. It’s absolutely imperative that I like the hero of any romance for me to fully enjoy it, and perhaps because I had such mixed feelings about Urien, I also struggled with feeling a connection between him and Fritha, even though I did like her quite a bit. Their feelings for one another just seemed to come from out of nowhere with little in the way of genuinely romantic interactions between them up to that point. I admit, though, that as the story progressed, the emotional connection improved, right up until the black moment when they’re torn apart. I couldn’t help but be upset with Urien at that point, and was rather disappointed that Fritha takes some of the blame for their separation when he finally returns, when I didn’t feel that she did anything wrong. Another thing I disliked about the story was the number of incidents of casual sexual harassment and assault that seemed to simply get brushed under the rug. I can handle this if it’s not excessive and only the villainous characters are doing it, but there are a couple of incidents of heroic characters engaging in this type of behavior as well, which just didn’t sit well with me. Some of the incidents didn’t really seem to advance the plot either and were just there for filler, so therefore unnecessary.

Overall, A Warrior’s Quest wasn’t a bad story, and there were parts of it I did like, but there were enough parts that I didn’t to drop it down into the OK range for me. I enjoyed the visit with Emryss (A Warrior’s Heart) and his now squire, young Hu, who becomes the hero of the next book, A Warrior’s Way. We’re also introduced to Sir George, a seemingly charming knight, who becomes the hero of book #7, A Warrior’s Bride. Even though this book didn’t wow me, I’m sure I’ll continue with the series at some point and look forward to seeing if these other men can become more admirable heroes. show less

Very good book with an unusual start. Dev is back at his country home after having won a great deal of money in a card game that he regrets playing. The man had been losing steadily and Dev tried everything he could to end the game before finally walking away. He's in his study when he sees a woman walking purposefully toward his house and expects it to be someone soliciting for a charity. He's startled when she appears right outside the doors.

Thea is the daughter of the man Dev won the show more money from. He has left England for Canada, leaving Thea behind. She no longer has her dowry or any way to support herself. She informs Dev that since he already has the dowry, he may as well take the bride. She explains that marriage to her will save him from the machinations of those trying to trap him into marriage. She will make no demands of him, other than ensuring that she has a home and security. She isn't sure that he'll agree, but she has to try.

I really enjoyed this encounter. Thea is independent, having spent years dealing with the consequences of her father's gambling. She's honest about her expectations. She's more nervous about this that she shows, but comes across quite confident. Dev is a bit taken aback by her forwardness, but feels a bit guilty about his part in her problems. He's still not too certain about agreeing to her proposal, until he kisses her. That kiss has quite an effect on both of them. Dev finds himself agreeing to the marriage. They part ways until the next day. Thea is vastly relieved, but it isn't long before Dev is having second thoughts. But he's a man of his word and won't back out.

Dev's doubts remain, even during their trip to Gretna Green, but they don't stop him from going through with it. The ceremony and wedding supper have some lighter moments, with the tension building toward their wedding night. He's still thinking of resisting the attraction, afraid that he rushed his way into a mistake. But the attraction is too strong .

Back in Cumbria the next day, there is some awkwardness as they enter married life. Dev is still doubting his wisdom and sends for his solicitor for advice. I had some issues with him, as he was extremely suspicious without even having met Thea. Dev is all too willing to listen to him and tries to distance himself from Thea. Meanwhile, she has gone into the town to order some new clothes and had two very different encounters. One with Lady Gladys, a young woman who is very nice, rather exuberant, and unfortunately klutzy. Thea likes her immediately. The second encounter is with the Duchess of Scane and her daughter Caroline, which doesn't go nearly so well. They are extremely rude to both Thea and Gladys. I loved seeing Thea stand up to them both. When she tells Dev what happened, I was glad to see that he supported her.

Over the next several days, Dev does his best to keep his distance emotionally, without letting on to Thea about what he is considering about their marriage. Thea is confused by his absence from her bed, worried that she has done something wrong. However, they do spend some time together, during which they get to know each other. I rather enjoyed Dev's confusion, as the more he learned about her, the more he believed in her, but he kept reporting bits of information to Roger. Thea fell harder for Dev, and continued to worry about the state of their relationship. There were a few times that their attraction overcame Dev's attempts to stay away, but he would still back away. Things started to get better between them until Roger found out information about Thea's father that worried both him and Dev.

It was quite satisfying to see Dev suffer the way he was. As the book goes on we learn a little bit more about why he falls prey to so many doubts. I ached for him and the effects that his parents' marriage had on him and his belief in the existence of love. I liked seeing his determination to find out the truth about Thea's father himself. The interruption of his search was a surprise, especially the reason for it. I loved his protectiveness, even under the circumstances. I suspected the perpetrator was going to cause more trouble, and he did. The rescue created some problems for him with Thea, and their tempers got the best of both of them. I loved seeing Thea stand up for her opinion and actions, though their later harsh words to each other caused doubt about their feelings on both sides.

Thea's pride and independence cause her to put herself into a dangerous situation and it's only Dev's fortunate arrival that gets her out of it. It was satisfying to see that Dev had finally seen what was most important in their lives and they were able to solve their differences.

I also really enjoyed the secondary characters. Gladys was my favorite with her blunt speech and endearing clumsiness. She was a truly nice person and I would love to see her get her own story. Surely there's some uptight nobleman that needs his life turned upside down? The Scane family was an interesting group. I liked the duke a lot. He treated both Dev and Thea well. His wife was definitely a stuck up witch, who was rude to anyone she felt didn't meet her standards. I started out disliking Caroline because of the way she treated Thea, but felt bad for her later in the book, even though she brought it on herself. I loved seeing how Thea's influence changed her life, and really wanted to see the resolution of her problem. Maybe she'll get her own book too, as there seemed to be some promise in an unexpected relationship. I'm still a little wishy-washy on Roger. I really didn't like how suspicious of Thea he was, especially once he met her. I became a little more understanding as some of his background was revealed. It would be interesting to see what his future holds in store for him.

Overall, I really enjoyed the book. There were parts that moved me to tears and others that had me laughing out loud. There were also several times I wanted to shake both Dev and Thea and tell them to talk to each other for heaven's sake! So much could have been avoided if they had shared their fears. I liked the ending with the glimpse into their future. show less

Really annoying. There was a short story's worth of actual romance here, and a great deal of "I am not worthy" mixing, oddly, with contempt - and the mixture perpetuated by a stubborn refusal, on both sides, to acknowledge their feelings even to themselves. The best feature is that it's both of them being equally idiots - which does not redeem it in my eyes. Paris' terrible secret is a) highly unlikely (he had only incompetent tutors, as a child and at Oxford?) and b) either unimportant or show more unable to be hidden. Clara's is almost as silly - thank goodness for her aunt. Glad I read it, going to read the third in the series (I've already read the second - and I do not recognize that Hester in the one presented here. Or see her as a good friend to Clara, either!) and unless that one's magnificent all three are going OUT. And apparently the aunt _can_ paint people not looking like the Duke of Wellington, at least as long as they're not people but personified myths. show less

The Dark Duke is the second book in Margaret Moore’s Most Unsuitable Men series, and another Harlequin Historical that’s been languishing on my TBR bookshelf ever since I was a subscriber to the Harlequin book service eons ago. I’d generally enjoyed the two books I’d previously read by this author, so I was looking forward to this one, and overall it was a pretty good read. It tells the story of Adrian, a young duke who has earned a somewhat undeserved bad reputation as the The Dark show more Duke because of all the scandals in which he’s been embroiled. He’s paired with Hester, an intelligent, bookish young woman who is acting as a ladies’ companion to Adrian’s stepmother. An attraction begins simmering soon after they meet, as each of them sees the hidden depths in one another, but a great deal of family drama ensues when Adrian’s dissolute half-brother, Elliot, returns home and stirs up some trouble between them.

Adrian deeply loved both of his parents, but after his mother’s death and his father’s subsequent remarriage, he didn’t always get on well with his stepmother. Then his father passed on, too, but before he died, he extracted a death bed promise from Adrian to look out for and protect his younger half-brother. Wracked with guilt because of an unfortunate incident that occurred when he was at Oxford and feeling that the scandal of it somehow caused his father’s death, he felt it was his duty and just penance to comply. Adrian hasn’t always been an entirely upstanding member of society, but his reputation as The Dark Duke is mostly undeserved. Because of the promise he made, he’s spent the ensuing years cleaning up his brother, Elliot’s messes and taking most of the blame for his bad behavior. After one such ugly incident, Adrian returns home to his country estate to find that his stepmother has hired a new companion. The young woman isn’t the most attractive female he’s ever seen, but as he gets to know her, he recognizes the kind, generous person she is and can’t help falling for her. Because of his past, though, he doesn’t feel he’s good enough for her, and when Elliot comes home, too, Adrian worries that his brother might either ruin her or try to steal her if he lets his feelings be known. Adrian has made some mistakes in the past, not the least of which is coddling Elliot, but underneath it all, he’s an honorable man who had good intentions that went astray. He also sees beyond the plain outer wrapping to the beauty inside Hester and knows that she’s exactly what he needs to help him become a better man.

Hester is the middle child in a trio of sisters and the only one of the three who ended up being rather plain. As such, she was always the wallflower, the smart, bookish young woman who would really rather be reading or learning, except that her father held no store in furthering her education. She’s accepted her lot in life graciously and doesn’t dwell on her lack of beauty, but she’s a realist who chose the path of becoming a ladies’ companion when it appeared that she was unlikely to find a suitable husband who would love her for herself. When Adrian returns home, Hester is wary of him at first, because his reputation precedes him. But she’s a perceptive woman who gradually figures out that Adrian doesn’t deserve much of the scorn that society has heaped upon him. Even when he finally reveals some of the darker parts of his past, she’s very understanding and compassionate. She also senses that, despite his charming veneer, Elliot is not the person he appears to be on the surface or the person his mother believes him to be. Hester is an intelligent woman who sees the things that others miss and gently pushes Adrian to be a better man. There were a couple of times, I worried that she might make the wrong choice that could lead to trouble, but I’m happy to report that she always uses her excellent discernment to do the right thing.

Overall, The Dark Duke was a pretty good read. It’s a little slow-paced in the beginning, but around the halfway mark, it picked up a bit. I like how Margaret Moore writes strong, intelligent women and men who appreciate them for more than their outward appearance. Her couples always seem to compliment each other well, and Adrian and Hester are no exception. I’d say that my main issue with the story that dropped the star was that the romance is somewhat overshadowed by the family drama between Adrian and Elliot. It’s the main source of conflict and sometimes stifled the romance because of Adrian’s fear that Elliot might try something with Hester if he knew how much Adrian cared for her. Also it takes up so much page time that there simply isn’t a lot of room for crafting that all-important emotional connection. Adrian and Hester’s relationship is built mostly on their individual intuitiveness about the other one, rather than actual romantic interludes. It’s admittedly a fairly strong foundation, but there was still a little something missing for me. There are no love scenes, either overt or implied, which isn’t usually a major detractor for me except when there’s not a lot else going on with regards to the romance. However, despite the weakness in the romantic pairing, I still managed to enjoy the story. The final book of the Most Unsuitable Men trilogy, The Rogue's Return, is going to be Elliot’s story, but given his bad behavior, I’m not sure how eager I am to read it. The author is going to have her work cut out for her redeeming him to my satisfaction. I probably will pick it up at some point since I’ve had mostly good experiences with this author’s work so far. I just might not be in a hurry to get to it. show less