Jim Carroll (1) (1950–2009)

The Petting Zoo is the novel that poet and musician Jim Carroll was working on when he died in September 2009. The book starts well. The premise has legs, and the first forty pages are written with promising energy and rich detail. But soon the work begins to struggle.

The author makes mistakes that published novelists and writing instructors consistently warn against. All the characters speak in the same voice with a similar lexicon; nothing makes their speech distinctive. A great deal of show more exposition is written as dialogue, making much of it awkward to the reader's mental ear. The secondary characters lack development, the narrative patterning is cumbersome, and the themes and symbolism are treated ham-fistedly. There is an ambitious vision in this book, but the telling is so flawed by amateurish narrative issues and the writer's hyperbolic infatuation with his main character that the vision cannot be realized.

Much more substantive editorial work was required to bring this book to a publishable standard. As a book editor, I know how difficult it is to work with posthumous manuscripts. Having read the book, I believe the decision to publish the manuscript was an error, one that won't add to Jim Carroll's artistic reputation. I doubt an unsigned writer who submitted a manuscript of this calibre would be put under contract, and if he were, the book would not be published until the major flaws were corrected. There are some strong moments, particularly early in the text, but overall this book is unrewarding. show less

The last thing you'd expect from Jim Carroll is a light, breezy story, and this is definitely no light, breezy story. It's a raw story of Billy Wolfram, an artist, with numerous hard, personal dramas -- social awkwardness and reclusiveness, obsessive immersion in his work, traumatized and stunted sexual development, and the guidance of an immortal muse-like talking raven. This is an extremely introspective novel, like Carroll's journals, poetry, and music. It's hard to imagine anything could show more be more searingly autobiographical than those other, earlier works, but this is it.

It's not going to be to everybody's taste, too dark for most, and probably dismissed by some others as just another story of a "tortured artistic soul." But to me, it reads as authentic. Wolfram isn't Carroll in a straight-forward way, but Wolfram's inner life, his obsession and his difficulty in figuring out whether and how to feed it, must be Carroll's. It feels too real not to be.

I think it's a shame that Carroll may be best known for the movie version of Basketball Diaries -- that movie just seems a pale shadow of its original, much less this book. Carroll died while writing The Petting Zoo, so we won't hear again from him. show less

I hate to speak ill of the recently dead, and Jim Carroll seems like he was a sincere and decent person, but we have to think about the happiness of the living, and that means it's incumbent upon me to warn the world of this unpleasant sludge of Catholic guilt, cliche-ridden homilies about the New York art world, and constant, constant telling you how it is. In keeping with his ponderous style--making much out of not much, like rolling your gruel around in your mouth to pretend it tastes show more like something--it takes Carroll 222 pages to write his way around to the point where the book names itself: "Denny didn't want to deflate Billy's enthusiasm by telling him that his ideas were not very original ... [t]he odd thing was that Billy was making all this out to be some big discovery, but these vague theories, which he clearly hoped would make an impression on Denny, were standard arcane trivia that Billy already knew." Billy's problem is also Carroll's problem, and the fact that he worked on this book for 20 years and this was the end result suggests he probably knew it. Like the tedious ass at the party--the guy who was super into, like, punk rock and never, ever moved on, who rolls out the same tired detritus about Walt Disney being cryogenically frozen or which sex scenes in which movies are unsimulated or Jimmy Page doing a girl with a red snapper--and that last one is a great example, because I looked it up on Wikipedia because what was that about again? and it's got a whole page under "Shark episode" and like, we all know exactly as much about that as we ever would want to, or in many cases probably much more, and some guys never got the memo and keep rolling it out, leeringly, as their stab at chitchat. You know? And Carroll isn't leering, but he is pedantically explaining everything to us, and it makes him crazy when people don't behave in the ways that he thinks are rational, and all his characters talk like him--like earnest Catholic boys who grew up in a time of ease and plenty, spent their lives trading on fucking scene cred, been dogmatic when young and stayed immature when old, and never gotten over a grievance against God for not making sure the world made sense.

I wish I could've asked Jim Carroll to stop making sense. It would have made this easier to take.Let's go to some random passages: "Later in his life, Billy still saw it as either the worst or the best day of his life, depending on how, why, and where he looked at it." Rambling repetition ("his life")--dude doesn't seem to understand the difference between writing and talking. Total unwillingness to let us connect the dots on our own--obsession with being understood--demand that we follow him closely, with the italics, with the pedantic unnecessariness of that whole last clause. Here, I'll rewrite that sentence: "Billy could never decide whether it was the worst day of his life or the best." Now it's just an egregious cliche. You want to excuse him for being sincere and wanting to communicate, but it's so solipsistic--only his precious thoughts and feelings matter. The garrulity of the failed raconteur.


I'm trying to avoid dialogue passages because it brings up the character/narrator/author distinction and I don't want to assume--but the fact is that all the characters talk the same, whether they're the Magic Old World Jewish Man or the all-forgiving, all-nurturing love interest or what. But there are SO MANY extended monologues in this book. It's fascinating as a character study, suffused as it is with the fear of aloneness, but how long can you spend being sympathetic before you just want to slap him and tell him to pep up? "'Anyway, it was the cliff that tempted you." This is a wise fucking spirit raven visiting to gloss everything for us and make sure we don't misinterpret Carroll's precious. "you had to test the limits of that shell's strength, as if you were calculating stress factors for a piece of steel sculpture." Totally unnecessary simile, not to mention that the word "calculating" drains all the tension from the scene, renders it bland and comical. (He is torturing a tortoise. The ol' "cruelty to animals as symbol of all that is irrational and terrifying in man" cliche. "The shell was so fragile that, after rushing down the stone face" (oh, thanks for filling us in that he did that. Couldn't we have figured it out on our own? It's like you think nothing happens unless you tell us about it. Creator anxiety. also, a second ago this was a fifteen-foot cliff; now you can rush down it) "you cried as you reached it. It was the same reptile you'd saved less than three hours earlier, and now it was shattered and dead." THANKS FOR THE RECAP, JACK. "You shouldn't feel guilt for doing this, though I see that you do." RAVEN EXPLAINS IT ALL, LIKE AN OLD-FASHIONED NON-PEDOPHILE PRIEST. SAY FIVE HAIL MARYS. "You are experiencing it this moment. But it is the way of all children. It is the way of mankind ... what they have done throughout history." Love those empty totalizing statements.


"A loud hum was rising from the circular clumps of chattering parvenus." Billy discovers the adjective. Carroll is also obsessed with poseurs, cred, and how things were better in the old days. you know what, man? I'm done. This is pissing me off. This book is shit, and neurotic Irish Catholic boys who just need total transcendent love and acceptance to deal with the incredible pain they feel at having to interact with a world they never made can eat it. I thought I was gonna feel better pulling out some of the most excruciating bits, but now I don't even wanna find them. Time for a walk.

Ha ha, oh, the title is stupid too. The petting zoo is where he goes after his freakout. It is symbolic of precisely nothing. Man, this review left me feeling sour. And I've still got the shakes. Time for a little hair of the dog! show less

The Petting Zoo, Jim Carroll's posthumous published novel, is an ardent, intimate, and somewhat autobiographical ode that the poet and novelist had been weaving and reconstructing for the last decade. In an ironical twist, Carroll died of a heart attack a year before he could experience and revel in the lyrical effect his first and last novel would have on the world, albeit in a quiet way. Some argue that The Petting Zoo is the troubled Carroll's farewell to the world.

In The Petting Zoo, show more Carroll's novel is juxtaposed with his previous chef d'oeuvre, The Basketball Diaries, which chronicles memoirs of a poetic addict whose beatific soul shines through. In the novel, protagonist Billy Wolfram, artist and emotional hermit, experiences an anxiety attack during an art exhibition at the Met. Billy's fraught emotional balance makes him increasingly self-deprecating bordering on insecure and tethering on the edge wherein his art and his very sanity hang in the balance. Without giving the eloquent though harried novel away, this oddly touching, ultimately tragic and heartbreakingly humane tale deserves intense discussion time and time again. show less